Little One by Fiona Holloway

Blurb
Seven years ago, Isabel Warren’s life unraveled in a single afternoon. Now she’s back reliving the same nightmare again…
She left the past behind, changed her name, and started over in a quiet town with her husband and their young son, Noah. But when he vanishes from their backyard without a trace, Isabel is forced to confront a terrifying some shadows never stay buried.
As suspicion tightens around her once again and whispers of her past grow louder, Isabel knows this is no random disappearance. Someone out there knows who she is. Someone has been watching. Waiting.
Now, to save her child, Isabel must unravel a mystery that began long before Noah was born and before the world decided who she was.
Haunting and propulsive, Little One is a chilling psychological thriller about buried secrets, fractured identity, and the impossible choices that define a mother’s love.
Review
I discovered this book from an advert on Facebook and when I saw it was only 99p on Kindle I decided to buy it for a holiday read.
I really wanted to like this book and was excited by what I read in the blurb but the amount of errors in this book was off the scale. I have never read a book with so many errors in. The storyline was so promising and even though I could see what was happening with the plot I really got into it but then the errors began.
The first half of the book was excellent but once the half way mark was passed the story became rushed and full of errors. It was almost like another had taken over and hadn’t reviewed what had been written before.
One of the mistakes was that the children started off as 3 and 5 years of age and then later in the book they became twins. Another error was that Isabel described how she met her husband in two entirely different ways. She also described how long Isabel had known Claire in two different time lengths. There were other errors as well.
I honestly don’t think the author had read her work back after reaching the end of writing and don’t think anyone looked over it for her before going to publish. This book had such promise but was severely let down by the errors and the errors really detracted from the story. I give this book 2 out of 5 Dragons.
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About the author
Fiona Holloway has written one standalone novel so far. This novel is called Little One and it was released in 2025.



I just had to stop reading because of the errors. I thought maybe the author started using AI halfway through or something. Super promising in the first half, to very sudden disappointment. A couple of inconsistencies can be overlooked, this book had one on every page after the halfway mark.
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I pushed through to the end as it was quite a short book but by the end I was just so annoyed that a book that bad had been allowed to be published.
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